I suppose Luna is too complex to be the main character, plus I do not think many people would relate to her.
Correcting your mistakes, you wrote "Why did J.K. Rowling whrote about Harry Potter" and you should have written "Why did J.K. Rowling write about Harry Potter" - because 'did' is already past.
Plus, you wrote "whonderfull" and you should have written "wonderful" instead; "Whe" and it should be "When".
I suppose this is all but I may have missed something.

Anyway, I like the way you draw Luna. I do not really like Luna, as a character, but this is close to how I imagine her.

But if you really want to read a good book, you should try "Twilight" and "New Moon", by Stephenie Meyer. The original version, not the dreadful translation. They put Harry Potter to shame. And your English might improve, which is also very important.

I miss you a lot.

lol
those mistakes..u realise this was a sketch..i really didnt notice that!!

thanmks any away

miss u 2

CiZ

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Haha well done she looks really confused - just like Luna!

Nice work

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wow!! does she..i really tried that!! i so glad io did it!! to try new expression is so much fun!!
really!!

im so glad you liked it!!

CiZ lov ya

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Still, it should come naturally.

lol
yeah it really should

I'm gonna say only ... nice work

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well thank u,then..but u can say more then just that..if u want to..u know?

CiZ

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well... I don't have to... you know what I'm thinking

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